Moreover, what I did was see the movies and take some notes or quotes that I could use or get inspired of and thats what I did:
- Movie starts on March 9 1928
- Policy that's says you have to wait 24 hours before the child disappears for the police to look for him.
- Found “her son” in DeKalb Illinois.
- “Your are in shock, you haven’t seen him in 5 months, the boy has changed, you have to give yourself time to recover from the shock, and with time, you will see this is your son. If you have any problems come talk to me. I give you my word. Mrs. Collins he has nowhere else to go.”
- “My son was inches taller than you”
- “Why are you not listening to me”
- “You are running away from your responsibilities as a mother”
- “I can take care of this boy, but you have stopped looking for my son”
- “ I appreciate what this department has done, but you have made a terrible mistake and you have to please help me find my son before its too late.”
- Dr. Earl Tarr was send to look at the child and try to convince her that it was her son
- Change in height: Trauma can affect the growth of children, given the stress of the past 5 months, his spine could have shrunk.
- “You are wasting time when you should be looking for my son”
- She refutes the report
- Police wants to avoid that they made a mistake.
- “This police department doe not tolerate descent or contradiction or even embarrassment and you are in a position where you can embarrass them and they do not like it”
- Dentist: not your son
- Teacher: changed enormously didn’t know her name, didn’t know where his seat was. “That is not your son”
- Press conference: “My name is Christine Collins, on March 10th my 9 year old son Walter Collins disappeared. The 5 months investigation led to a boy being brought to L.A from DeKalb Illinois. They told me and all of you that this boy was my son; he is not my son. The L.A Pd made a mistake. I have letter from his teachers and doctors saying that that boy is not my son; I’m having them reprinting now and I will have them for you tomorrow
- “I have given the L.A pd every opportunity to admit their mistake and renew the search for my son since they refuse to do so it has forced me to bring my case public and I hope that this will persuade them to finish what they started and bring my son home to me”
- Called her and took me to the department from the back door
- Caused quite a bit of trouble.. Embarrassment to the police try to make fools out of this do you enjoy this.. Responsibilities of a mother
- “You are a liar and a troublemaker
- Took her to a mental hospital, L.A psychopathic ward
- Suffers from paranoia delusions of persecution and dislocation from reality
- Photo of you at the train stations welcoming home your son, didn’t say anything.
- “Certify that you were wrong when you say the boy was not your son... it further stipulates the police where right when they send you here for observation and it absolves them from all responsibility.”
You certainly did your homework here Fiorella!!!
ResponderEliminarYou also seem very passionate about this story, which will take you far in your editing of the monologue. You have a good first draft, and that gave me lots of ideas for its improvement into draft number 2 etc etc....
I think you're overwhelming yourself with the content you're trying to stuff into this monologue. Consider Aristotle's plot ark here... for this assignment, it would probably be more effective to stick to one part of the story, like the first bit, and really draw it out, using imagery, place details...give us a sense of the character speaking, and what's she's dealing with, rather than a police report of each and every thing that happened. so, i would say, pick one piece of the story, develop it to a climax, and finish it, taking time to develop the nuances that will make this monologue shine.